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4 Misconceptions about Slam Poetry (and what it actually is)

By: Madelyn Taylor

Like most artistic movements, it’s hard to determine an exact source of Slam Poetry. To some point Marc Smith, who, inspired by experimental poets like Allen Ginsberg, began searching for a way to breath life into the open mics in Chicago. By focusing on the performance aspect of poetry, Marc started a poetry reading series at a Chicago jazz club, and eventually, like the true american event it was, the readings became competitive. In 1990, the very first National Poetry slam started a tradition that still runs today.

 

But what is a Poetry Slam?

 

Well it’s not…

 

  1. Poetry recitation

Maybe you had to recite poetry for English. Maybe your school held a poetry recital. Whatever the reason, everyone is familiar with the stiff silence and polite applause that accompanies a poetry recital. But nothing could be further from the truth when it comes to a Slam. Not only are poets required to bring original work (no Robert Frost here!), but poems are meant to be performed. The poet is always looking to elicit laughter, cheers, tears, reaction from the listeners, making poems just as fun for the performers as for the audience. It is not uncommon, and is highly encouraged, for a Poetry Slam audience show their appreciation of a poem through clapping, stomping, yelling, and yes, snapping.

 

  1. Beatnik

If the words “Spoken Word Poetry” conjures up images of black turtlenecks, bongo drums, and that one cafe scene from “An Extremely Goofy Movie”, you may be thinking of a different event. Although performance poetry may have originally been inspired by the beatnik movement, a modern poetry slam is far from the beret wearing events of yesteryear. Slam poetry is meant to be understood.

 

  1. Rap Battle

This is another case of influence. From early in it’s life, hip hop has been an active contributor to the slam poetry culture (did you know Kanye’s “Gold Digger” was first performed at a slam?), especially among young poets. Both rap and slam poetry rely heavily on rhythm and flow, and both have informal formats which tackle complex issues. A Slam should not be confused with a rap battle, though. In a slam there are at very least 5 poets (sometimes upward of 30), and instead of bouncing off each other for improvised performances, the majority of poems are prepared in advance.

 

  1. Poetry Geeks Only!!

One of the greatest things about slam poetry is its appeal to people from all walks of life — not just English geeks! If you’re worried you wouldn’t fit in because you don’t particularly love Shakespeare, or you’ve never read Leaves of Grass, never fear! Spoken Word is about sharing your stories, and if everyone had the same experiences, the platform would be useless. So don’t be afraid to dive right it, poetry geek or no, into one of the most honest forms of expression out there.

What Slam Poetry is, is performance poetry. And while a poetry slam may have a specific format, slam poetry itself is anything you want it to be – whether that means rap, soliloquy, or breaking out the iambic pentameter, it’s up to you. However complicated it may seem, slam poetry is primarily about creating a platform for you to say things fully in the best way you know how. It’s about telling your story. And it’s a ton of fun.

Come check out the poetry slam being hosted by the BYU English Society on October 15th from 6-8pm at The Wall! Hope  to see you there!

My Story Podcast Episode 006

https://soundcloud.com/byu-english-society/my-story-episode-006-rachel-rueckert

BYU English alumna Rachel Rueckert describes her experiences with doing field studies to Ghana and India, Teach for America, traveling around the world for a year-long travel-writing honeymoon, and working for Harvard’s MOOC platform.

Join us at The Legend of Sleepy Hollow

On October 24th, BYU’s English Society will be attending a performance of The Legend of Sleepy Hollow at the Covey Center Theatre at 7:30pm.

 

 

If you are like me, the only thing that comes to mind when you hear The Legend of Sleepy Hollow is a vague memory from an old Disney film with a super skinny white guy and a scary headless horseman. Since details of the plot had long since faded from my memory, I did a little internet research to figure out what this story is all about.

 

 

The Legend of Sleepy Hollow began as a book written by Washington Irving. Interestingly enough, it is “among the earliest examples of American fiction with enduring popularity,” or so says Wikipedia. The protagonist is one Ichabod Crane, a spindly schoolmaster from New England set on obtaining the heart of Miss Katrina Van Tassel, the only child of a wealthy local farmer. Ichabod must compete with Abraham “Brom Bones” Van Brunt, the town hero and muscle man for Katrina’s affection.

 

The Van Tassel family throws a harvest party which both male suitors attend. Bones spends the party telling frightening local legends (particularly one about a headless horseman) while Ichabod tries and fails to secure Katrina’s hand in marriage.

 

On his ride home, Ichabod start hearing spooky sounds and encounters a silent stranger at a crossroads in the woods. After traveling a ways Ichabod notices to his horror that the stranger’s severed head is on his saddle. Ichabod tries to outrun the horseman in a mad dash through the woods and over a bridge. He recalls the legend he heard earlier claimed that the specter would disappear after crossing water, but when he reaches the other side the headless horseman follows right on his tail and hurls his head straight at Ichabod’s horrified face.

 

 

The next day, Ichabod is nowhere to be found. The only things that remain are a wandering horse, a trampled saddle, a discarded hat, and a mysterious shattered pumpkin. Brom Bones marries Katrina and it is said that whenever the story of Ichabod’s disappearance is mentioned he gets a knowing look in his eye.

 

 

Though maybe not very gruesome by our modern standards, this tale has haunted people since the early days of this country and continues to be a trademark of the Halloween season. Come out and enjoy this spooky performance of this classic story with BYU’s English Society!

My Story Episode 005

https://soundcloud.com/byu-english-society/05-my-story-episode-005-kathy-cowley

The BYU English Society presents the fifth episode of its weekly audio podcast, My Story, featuring BYU alumnus Kathy Cowley.

See Kathy’s presentation on Jane Austen and the Art of Argument (given at Ignite Phoenix) and read about her experience on Kathy’s website.
See Kathy’s film-a-day 365 project on Tumblr or YouTube.
Check out Kathy’s memoir / BYU Honors Thesis, An American Teenager in Brazil

3 Reasons to Write Fiction

By Jesse Bunton

Most of today’s full-time students and working professionals—heck, even most full-time parents—can find it challenging to carve out the time from their busy schedules to indulge in the art of writing fiction. Here are three reasons why doing so will always be worth your while.

1. Writing Fiction Increases Your Empathy:

“The deepest purpose of reading and writing fiction is to sustain a sense of connectedness, to resist existential loneliness” -Pierre Bourdieu

Writing a good story is a challenge. If you’ve ever picked up pen and paper, or sat down in front of your computer, to write a fictional story (even if only a short story), then you’ve likely experienced the struggle of breathing life into a fictional character. We’ve all been there, shaking our heads and asking ourselves what it takes to render a distinct characterization that possesses relatability.

First of all, the answer is not to go people-watching in the same park every weekend. Rather, the answer to the art of characterization lies in the development of our ability to communicate how other human beings feel and, beyond that, to communicate why they feel the way they do about particular topics. This means doing the unthinkable: putting down your smartphone long enough to talk to people, to communicate with those that espouse different beliefs than your own. Try it. You’ll survive.

Writing fiction is where we immortalize the people we met. Writing a believable character is a contemplative effort that, when practiced regularly, will invariably increase your ability to characterize the people around us in a rich, believable way. More importantly, the practice of writing fiction forges strong connections between you and the distinct people from whom you fashion your characters.

2. Writing Fiction Develops Creativity:

Fortunately for me and you, this shouldn’t require much explanation. Still, this is an important reason to begin writing fiction regularly. Regularly writing fiction is one the best ways for you to question, and often to change, your personal paradigms.

All around us are patterns, standards, models, and archetypes. Fiction, in its most basic function, provides both the writer and the reader the opportunity to break free of life’s more mundane patterns. Fiction provides writers, specifically, with the opportunity to deconstruct and reconstruct paradigms into new models that are can be thrilling and unique. Therein dwells “genius.” Obviously, these creative efforts involve multiple parts of the human brain and can strengthen our recall while simultaneously developing our critical problem-solving abilities.

3. Writing Fiction is Meaningful:

When was the last time you heard someone say—whilst discussing familial heirlooms—how grateful they were to have a video cassette recording that their parent’s made of the TV show “Wheel of Fortune”? Or when was the last time you heard someone planning to make a scrapbook to document all the movies their family had watched together on Netflix? For a majority (excluding those individuals that will promptly begin working on a Netflix scrapbook after reading this article) it seems odd to consider either scenario because the emotional values of the two “hypothetical heirlooms” are negligible.

History has a habit of preserving things that are meaningful…and what has it preserved? Amidst all sorts of artifacts, artwork, and elaborate architectural designs, two undisputed champions rise above everything else: language and literature. History has preserved stories because history could not exist without them. From Homer’s writings on Greek mythology to Sophocles’s dramas, works of fiction have been well-preserved because they address what it means to be human (sometimes questioning it too).

We each have an opportunity to join in a rich heritage of writing. We have the opportunity to create contemporary works of fiction that can echo our historical relatives and share paradigm-shaking messages about the human experience. To preserve our most precious ideas, all we have to do is write.

My Story Podcast Episode 004

https://soundcloud.com/byu-english-society/my-story-episode-004-justin-shaw

The BYU English Society presents the fourth episode of its weekly audio podcast, My Story. This week, English Society’s podcast producer Justin Shaw talks about his experiences at the Washington Seminar, working with the Democratic Caucus.

Washington Seminar: https://washingtonseminar.byu.edu/pages/default.aspx

Internship Opportunities: http://englishinternships.byu.edu.

11 Tips for Online Writing

Chances are you’re already doing some online writing, whether it’s a full blog post or a caption for a picture on Facebook.Online writing is becoming incredibly common and for all audiences, so what are the requirements for good online writing?

First, I’ll explain the difference between online writing and print writing. There are honestly quite a lot of similarities between the two styles of writing, but print is allowed to be a little lengthier. The layout of magazines draws the reader with colors and illustrations. Magazines tend to be a little more artsy, meaning that you can add a little more flair to your work to catch the reader’s attention.

Reading articles online is a lot harder than reading them in print, so people don’t read web articles, they scan them. They pick out headings, sentences, and phrases. If that quick scan is an information overload or not interesting enough, they will notcontinue reading. Studies have shown that web articles should be about half the length of print articles.

Here are some rules for web writing:

  1. Keep it short. If you can say in it two words, do it. Think of the simplest way to say that still makes sense. Short, powerful statements are best, especially for social media.
  1. Grab their attention. Titles are the most important part. If you don’t have a good title that tells readers exactly why they should click and read, you won’t get read. Use action words.

That doesn’t mean you have to put “Mom gave birth to baby with three heads. What happens next will make you cry…” Don’t be tacky, but make it interesting. A common trend right now is “7 Ways…” or “How to…” type of things. Putting “Faith Gives You Wings,” is pretty, but putting “4 Ways to Strengthen Your Faith” is clear and SEO-friendly (easy to search).

  1. Be clear. Have someone who has no idea what you’re writing about read your article and tell you what they think the main message is. Do they get it? If not, rewrite until they do.
  1. Make it conversational. If you’re struggling with writing something simply, think of how you could explain it to your mother/grandmother.
  1. Break it into chunks. Large blocks of text are intimidating for web readers. If it’s too long, try breaking it up. Web readers like more white space, because it is much less intimidating to read three short chunks than huge paragraphs.

 

Don’t do this.

Nebraska is filled with internationally recognized attractions that draw large crowds of people every year, without fail. In 1996, some of the most popular places were Fort Robinson State Park (355,000 visitors), Scotts Bluff National Monument (132,166), Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum (100,000), Carhenge (86,598), Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer (60,002), and Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park (28,446).

 

Do this.

In 1996, six of the most-visited places in Nebraska were:

  • Fort Robinson State Park
  • Scotts Bluff National Monument
  • Arbor Lodge State Historical Park & Museum
  • Carhenge
  • Stuhr Museum of the Prairie Pioneer
  • Buffalo Bill Ranch State Historical Park

Though, unless you’re writing for a travel company, your audience may not be incredibly interested in Nebraska (see number 9).

  1. Stay informative. If it’s not entirely relevant, cut it. Stay informative rather than trying to be clever or witty, especially with titles and subheadings. Don’t use clichés.
  1. Make it interesting to look at. Web doesn’t always have a pretty layout or illustrations to draw in the reader. Images and videos break up the text and are interesting. If you want to hold attention, include relevant, well-done images that catch the eye.
  1.     Cite sources. Online readers are a little more skeptical, so make sure you cite your sources. Relevant links are also great to get the readers to engage with more material.
  1.     Know your audience. Picture the people you are writing to in your mind’s eye. Go through the article as if you were that kind of reader and make changes to better fit the text to your audience. Select material that fits the needs of your audience.
  1. Highlight keywords. Hyperlinks are one way to do this, but you can also use bolding and/or color variation.
  1. List-icles are great. Lists are great way to break things up. Write a bolded short sentence at the beginning that summarizes what the rest of the list segment will be about. Don’t use solid blocks of text in lists. Break it up.

 

Clarity and simplicity are the keys here. When in doubt, make it simpler.

Follow these steps and you’re well on your way to becoming a quality online writer.

Writing a Thesis Statement

The following is a sort of “advice column” from the Writing Center that gives some writing tips for academic papers.

In high school you might have learned to write essays with five paragraphs: one to introduce your thesis, three to argue it, and one to conclude it. Writing at the collegiate level, however, rarely allows for such a rigid formula. Depending on the complexity and depth of your assignment, you might have to provide more than just evidence for your thesis. You may have to contextualize it, challenge its counterarguments, offer solutions—things that could employ any number of paragraphs, not just five.

A strong thesis can help you avoid formulaic writing and effectively communicate with your audience. The more you learn about the purpose, definition, and technique of thesis statements, the stronger your theses will become, and the more your subsequent skills of organization, technique, and style will improve.

A thesis defines the scope of a piece of writing, the limits of what material your work will cover. It helps readers understand what to look for as they read, and it can help keep you from digressing as you write. Additionally, a thesis gives the writing energy, a sense of forward motion, which captivates your readers and leads them through each paragraph to the conclusion.

Your job in researching a topic is to compile observations, which are deductive statements about the facts that you discover. You may conclude something like:

“Julius Caesar was a tyrant.”

While this opinion is useful in beginning your writing, it’s difficult to sustain strong academic writing on such a one-dimensional idea. A strong thesis combines observations with perspective. As you collect your observations, ask yourself what factors might have caused the conditions of your observation or what implications your observation might lead to. You might posit something like

“Julius Caesar’s experience in the military cultured his tyrannical behavior.”

A perspective like this adds dimension to your writing, which will ultimately make it more reasonable and engaging.

Strong theses also employ concrete words, which reference particular, explicit ideas. Words like “Julius Caesar,” “aggressive,” “establishment,” and “dictator” are specific enough to form a coherent concept and keep your reader from getting confused. With more concrete words, a thesis might look something like this:

“Julius Caesar’s aggressive leadership at the Battle of Alesia led to his establishment as a dictator.”

Try to think of your thesis from an unbiased perspective. Have you considered all the implications of your argument? What would someone who disagrees with you have to say? The strongest theses do not ignore their counterarguments, but confront them openly. They inspire opposing points of discussion, rather than put them down.

Developing these advanced strategies might seem overwhelming, but practicing them as much as you can will improve your writing in the long run. If you ever need help, come talk to a Writing Center tutor.

Stance: Studies on the Family

 Your stance is important. We want to hear what you have to say!

Stance: Studies on the Family is a student journal associated with Brigham Young University. This student journal was created to encourage students from all disciplines to research and to write about the institution of marriage and family. Our journal emphasizes the impact that marriage and family have on society and increases awareness of current issues affecting the family. We encourage professionalism, respect, and tolerance.

By joining our staff, you can improve your skills with blogging, editing, design, and so much more. Our staff works on a student journal, a magazine, and a blog in addition to various social media sites. You’ll gain experience valuable to potential employers and make lasting friendships.

Want to get published? Right now, we are looking for creative writing to academic papers to personal essays. It doesn’t matter what your major is or the length of your work or how informal/formal you think it is—we want to hear what you have to say! Submit to Stance: Studies on the Family today! Go to the following link for more information: http://stanceforthefamily.byu.edu/submissionguidelines/

Deadline: Submit by 10/10/2014 at midnight. If you have any questions, please email (sftfjournal@gmail.com).

Whether you join our staff or submit your work to be published, we hope to hear from you soon!

Katie Hollingsworth, Editor-in-Chief of Stance: Studies on the Family

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